The making of Immortal~不死人的告白
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在”Immortal~不死人的告白”成型之前,它原本是个英文的诗句。后来因歌曲的制作而用华语重写。虽然不尽相同,但都保留了主要要表达的意识。成型后的华语歌词在这里,你可以对照看看。
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We got some request of translating the song, but instead of translating it ourselves, I think it’ll be more meaningful if I post this.
I wrote this 2, 3 years back, it’s something like a poet. It’s the starting frame work for the song Immortal~不死人的告白. It’s in English originally, then re-wrote in Chinese for the song’s production.
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Immortality
When I open my eyes this time, I see things so clear as if i have just woke from an ages of sleep. The scenery i saw before that, are they dreams? past? or future?
When loneliness strikes my emptied soul like bombs falling from the sky, only then I feel alive, in pain and misery, but real and fascinating. I know I must survive for unknown reasons. I’m losing my passion drop by drop instead of my blood.
In memento of that epic love, which also is the unvanished scene of war, I leave the scar stays on my heart. Remind me that I’ve been deeply in love before, and to remind me that I’ve never been disappeared before.
Give me hope, and give me an end. Don’t leave me live forever in loneliness. May this vague kiss be my last goodbye, end this boundless journeys of mine to belief there will be a much better comfort.
Give me love, and give me solitude. Don’t leave me live forever in happiness. It makes people wonder if they’re living in a fake, in a lifeless dream which you’ll never be awake.
In this lost, gigantic world, I will find you by the fragrance you have in my thoughts. That is a never-ending future, and will be a never ending past, rotating…
On that special day, the sky was a color that beyond words to describe, It will wittily disappear once you addicted to it. When I’m finally being forgiven, I wish this will be my last memory…
Give me hope, and give me an end. Don’t leave me live forever in loneliness. May this vague kiss be my last goodbye, end this boundless journeys of mine to belief there will be a much better comfort.
Give me love, and give me solitude. Don’t leave me live forever in happiness. It makes people wonder if they’re living in a fake, in a lifeless dream which you’ll never be awake.
~end~
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Moon.
sankyu~
Mel said this on October 22nd, 2008 at 12:39 am
Wow…thanks @@
That’s beautiful…
Ainath said this on October 25th, 2008 at 4:24 pm
btw, it has nothing to do with the song but.. where are the Mhotos Ichiro promised ?
Mel said this on October 26th, 2008 at 8:03 am
Very soon….
moon said this on October 26th, 2008 at 8:39 pm